Worthylake

I had an idea for a short the other day, and this is my first attempt to get some stuff on paper for it. This tapir is a secondary character, but he's still got some evolving to do. Any design suggestions /critiques will be much appreciated! I'm going to try to make this focus for the next while



Also,feel free to worship this in the meantime...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jDZHr8exnjU